Friday, March 19, 2010

This is the beginning.....

Shri Ganeshay namah is best to start with.....
my first few lines about the person underneath...
by default the rhyme scheme is 1-2-1-2,
therefore i hav to end this line with word sounding u,
i hav no idea wher this poem type paragraph is takin' me to,
using slang words and avoiding "heavy" words like milieu(etc.),
i am a fan of Facebook English...
all shud use it... i wish,
now i am getting more interested towards writing this poem,
as i am typin' without thinkin' the words ... as they occur in my mind frame by frame...
i think eminem pairs better to the word poem than frame....
or i could hav used the word game...
the poem is not getting boring... is it??
this was the best line here, to fit,
oh... u all will say..."until now... where is the person underneath coming?"
Hey don't loose patience .... as the title says ...
"This is the Beginning"

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